Tuesday, January 21, 2014

My First Writing Piece to Share!

So, I decided I'd share a small prologue from a novel I'm trying to write. I really like it so I think it'd be good enough to share!





Prologue, Uncontrolled Magic:

Heart racing. Legs aching. Small little midnight colored mists shooting from my hands. I run. From what? I had no idea. Maybe it was myself. Maybe I was running away from the curse. Yes. A curse. The halls were dark, and a stinging, sour taste of salt was sinking into my tongue. The scent of the hallway was strange. Many scents mixed. I didn't know how to explain that disgusting smell. The clatter of the stone floor against my boots was like a shattering window. And the feel of soft mists coming from my hands. It was cool, yet disgusting at the same time. I was running from this curse of mine that would stay with me forever. I had no idea how to control it, but I had to.

            This hallway was stone bricks, some bricks had fallen onto the ground, while most of the hall was still intact. Columns at the floor, crushing anything beneath them. I kept running as fast as I could. Nothing was about to stop me. I had to find a way to get control of this curse.

 

            By the time I had gotten all the way down the hall, I saw the stone doorway I was looking for. I stopped running and gave myself a moment to breathe. When I was ready, I walked normally through the door. My robes rustling gave a creepy incense to the staircase I was walking down. I looked at the steps. This place is scary...I have to keep moving though. There may be something down here to help me with this curse. I thought, closing my hands into a fist. The magics coming from my hands stopped going crazy, and I felt that I'd be okay for a while. Then I stepped on the last step, heard the noise of an ice sheet coming over it, then felt myself falling forward. I forced my clenched fists open, having another slippery substance spread onto the floor I was trying to catch myself on, then having my hands hit the ground, sending my legs up above my head into the air. I had done a summer salt. I landed on my toosh and stood up, grasping to the wall, which was going to end up being turned into something, and slid carefully over all the floor. Eventually I found myself at a part that wasn't slippable and stepped onto it, still being careful and letting go of the wall. I looked into the distance. There wasn't anything but stone hallways. I gave a sigh then grasped onto the wall again, turning it into a weird sticky substance and let go of it, being careful of the floor. I made my way back up the stairs and through the messy stone hallway where I came from.

 

Then the courtyard came into view. I started running out into the field, many different types of magical abilities coming from my hands and feet. I knew I should've been in my room, where I wouldn't mess anything up, but what was the point of keeping myself there when I could cause trouble outside? I jumped onto the small little pond, which turned into ice right as I touched the water, I then slid off into the grass of the courtyard. It looked like I was going to have to learn to ice-skate. I sighed. I really needed to be able to control this magic.

            Being five years old, and having magic was not a good combination. I started to walk back inside towards my room when a huge shadow came up from behind me. I bit my lip, scare-dom bubbling inside me, and then tried to pretend it wasn't there. I kept walking, the shadow moved with me. I knew it wasn't my shadow. No. Couldn't be. Then I looked down at the shadow again and saw that the shadow's mouth was moving.

I couldn't hear it. Nothing came. I turned around slowly, to see a large tree behind me. I backed away slowly. Although it was just a tree, it still freaked me out. It wasn't anything like the other ones in the courtyard. As I walked backwards, I stepped onto the ice, and slipped back towards the tree. Then the tree took a step towards me. I stood up as fast as could, ignoring my random sorts of magic and quickly jumped as much as I could over the pond and then slipped to the grass, still standing, then started to run as quickly as I could again. Snow started to form below my feet. I looked behind me, at the walking tree. It was now following me. I screamed and started to run faster. Then I hit a wall, and slid down it, looking up at the tree, that had gotten to me, and was leaning over me. I could feel my heart pumping fast. Jell-O legs. This was just creepy. The tree soon moved one of it's branches using it as a hand then reached for mine. I screamed again and pulled my hand over my face, a cold substance shooting from my hand at the tree's face. The tree dodged the magic and then pulled me up. I kicked the tree over, as of it being about as big as I was, and then started running inside.

            When I got inside, I did my best not to let my magic show. My mother had magic too, and she could control it. I must have gotten the magic from her, but for some reason couldn't control mine. I ran towards my room, hoping none of my sisters would see me, and then locked myself inside. My room was chaos. I looked around at the crazy mess. There was midnight mist, ice, snow, crystal, tropical vines, forest vines with spikes,  and pretty much anything that Sorcerer magic could do. I slipped down to the ground, leaning on the locked door, and watched more ice grow across the floor as my hands touched it. This was impossible. Five years of my life I had made this entire mess in my room. My bed was about the only clean thing in my room, and it was off in a corner that I never went to, I knew by now that if I touched my bed, I would ruin it. I tried standing up, only to fall down again because of the ice and then felt a mist beneath me. I laid down right there, tears coming from my eyes. I started to cry.

It's a first draft, so it doesn't have great spelling.

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